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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by Janitsu » January 24, 2015 11:37am | Report
Could you guys use a general code for the submissions? I mean, I could help with the organizing.

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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by Unscathed » January 24, 2015 5:28pm | Report
Wulfstan wrote:

Just got a PM from Hamster saying that he's out. I feel bad for him, but this takes us down to normal sized groups everywhere.

I could imagine kody grinning right now
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by KoDyAbAbA » January 24, 2015 7:58pm | Report
no no i'm very sad RIP in peace hamster :'c


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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by oldKainen » January 25, 2015 2:51am | Report
Janitsu wrote:

Could you guys use a general code for the submissions? I mean, I could help with the organizing.


Well, I would suggest to everyone in FoC to the table I did for the hero stats because it tell everything of the hero stats.
I put the skill information in a similar way to Dota2 Wiki, with notes and all information needed.

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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by KoDyAbAbA » January 25, 2015 2:53am | Report
did that before you scrubbus >:{D

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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by Janitsu » January 25, 2015 3:33am | Report
KoDyAbAbA wrote:

did that before you scrubbus >:{D



Eww. Columns. True MobaFire Master Dragonlords use tables already. It's time for you to move on as well :^)

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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by KoDyAbAbA » January 25, 2015 3:36am | Report
give me the code.i will be happy to oblige.

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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by ElDiablo » January 28, 2015 10:23pm | Report
Gonna post mine today if i get the lore ready.
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by MrLocket » January 29, 2015 10:16am | Report

Hal'abret the Shield Breaker

"People calls me the Legendary Shield Breaker, sometimes I call myself a dragon slayer."
If aegis is the king of shields, then the mighty Hal'abret the Legendary Shield Breaker is the master of all armors, who possess the mystery power that pierce through even the hardest part of all known metals. It is said that he was born at the exact moment when Aegis was forged, and blessed with the divine power that Aegis possesses. His passions and hungers to looks for an unbreakable armor was never exhausted, spending years and traveling the land, feeling and touching the finest armor of every towns, he was never satisfied and continues to his never-ending journey.

His long journey leads him to his true destiny when the rumors are spreading that a dragon whose skin are harder than any known metals are spreading terrors on a small town. The dragon was never stopped as there is not even a single weapon on the surface of the Earth are sharp enough to penetrate its skin. Without hesitation, the burning desire of Hal'abret has brought him to the dragon, never knowing that this decision will change his life forever. As the Hal'abret finally meets the dragon, the battle was quickly ended as Hal'abret crushed the dragon's skin with only a force that can't even crush a wood plank in ordinary hands. When Hal'abret walk away disappointedly, the dying dragon unleash its last breath of fire on him. Taken by surprise, Hal'abret was devoured in a fireball. In hopeless of survival, a shiny light shoot out from the flame of desperation, Hal'abret was back from the death when a shiny array shell surrounding him fades off. From that moment, Hal'abret realised that his true purpose of his life is not satisfying his own desire, but to crush the evils in the land with his unique power and brings justice to the world.


Description


Hal'abret is a hero who focus on melting down enemy heroes' armor and destroys their protection from physical attacks, and dishes out a lot of damage with Pierce Slash which scales well with his AGI. He has a reliable slow and somewhat scales into late game as base armor will be increased when enemy heroes gaining more AGI from level up. He also neutralise any armor boosters or armor reduction debuffs of enemies' with his Armor Conversion. His ultimate grants him a buff which prevents enemy heroes from targeting him with targeted-spell at all, and resurrects when killed before buff duration ends, which possibly makes him a legit Divine Rapier holder.

This hero's main role is carry as his skillset scales well into late game. But he also can be played as roamer, ganker or maybe semi-support due to his reliable slow that greatly boosts his teammate's physical damage output efficiency. This hero can be used as counter when opposite team consists of a lot of targeted spells (Divine shield), or enemy AGI carry who rather AGI/damage items than HP items. This hero requires a lot of farm due to his poor farming potential. With average STR gain he can be squishy to stay in fight without extra HP boosts.


Stats


FACTION: The Radiant
PRIMARY ATTRIBUTE: Agility
ATTACK TYPE: Melee
ROLE(S): Carry, Semi-Carry, Ganker, Roamer


STR: 60.2 at level 25 (17+1.8/level)
AGI: 93.2 at level 25 (26+2.8/level)
INT: 54 at level 25 (18+1.5/level)

HP: 1670 (473 at level 1)
MP: 962 (234 at level 1)
Damage : 141-143 (54-56 at level 1)
Range : Melee
Armor : 11 (1.4 at level 1)
Speed : 315


Skills



Q: Piercing Strike


W: Guard Crush


E: Armor Conversion - Positive


E: Armor Conversion - Negative


R: Divine Shield



Responses



Spawning


Beginning the Battle


Drawing First Blood


Moving


Attacking


Casting a Spell


Casting Guard Crush


Casting Divine Shield


Gaining a level


Last Hitting


Denying


Killing a hero


Dying


Rampage


Respawning


Rare


Purchasing an Item


Respawning with Divine Shield/Aegis of the Immortality


Obtaining rune


Killing a rival


Dying to a rival


Meeting an ally


Victory


Defeat
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep by ElDiablo » January 29, 2015 10:20pm | Report
Sorry but i couln't get the lore ready yesterday because i had school works to do but i'm gonna finish and post her today.
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