Come Judge Cuttleboss' Voice Acting

Dota 2's top notch voice acting got me back into doing dubs for fun. Since I have a pretty good microphone, I decided to try to dub The Black Heart, a free gothic indie horror game ala Darkstalkers created by Argentinian artist Andres Borghi. (more info and game download here: http://www.theblackheart.com.ar/)

Basically, I don't get much feedback from my subscribers on this, because its so different from what I normally do (reviews). I would love to hear what any of you think.

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This is the intro, practicing narration.

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This is the first character story, practicing character voices.

Hashi was based off Bloodseeker mixed with some Nyx Assassin, and Malen was based on Treant Protector. Final was based on Abbadon's voice.
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This is the second story. Final and Narrator come back.

You're really good at doing all sorts of different voices. Nice work!

Thanks Bunkansee! I'm glad you liked it.

I watched the first video, and I've got to say I like your voice! I think it's pretty fitting for the narration bit. One suggestion would be to slow down a bit to give the audience a breather to let the words sink in.

Pory im pretty sure he had to speed the speed up to keep up with the video, which was starting to gain momentum.

Good one cuttle.

I should've probably doing the part one slower, but it was synced to the music, so I chose to stick with that. Glad you two liked it though.

OMG! I like that voice! Definitely good!

Thanks USH.

http://hydra-media.cursecdn.com/dota2.gamepedia.com/5/51/Ratt_thanks_02.mp3

I released a new part. It'd be cool if I could get feedback on that.


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rMKsMrAi9rE

It was great! I especially liked the whispering effect you gave that monster.


Also, it might just be me, but I'd like to hear a little more change in tone. I know the voice is supposed to be more monotonous than usual, and I wasn't really bothered by it, but I think you could add more emphasis to certain words when you were voicing the monster. Just something for you to keep in mind if you're looking to improve :).


EDIT:
I liked the beginning narration the most, by the way.