Overseer, the lord of Wind and Sight

I have problems with the "R" ability. The damage per second needs to be nerfed. When this ability is fully leveled, it will do 150 damage per second over 7 seconds globally. This is 1050 damage to all enemy heroes, not to mention the 420 to creeps and the global slow. I would seriously consider taking this one down a notch.

I have problems with the "R" ability. The damage per second needs to be nerfed. When this ability is fully leveled, it will do 150 damage per second over 7 seconds globally. This is 1050 damage to all enemy heroes, not to mention the 420 to creeps and the global slow. I would seriously consider taking this one down a notch.

The thing is well.... it's just the flat base dps (150*7), what I think is crazy is that it has additional damage that keeps adding up, and that is 60 damage per second = 60+120+180+240+300+360+420, which equals to 1680+1050 = 2730 damage GLOBALLY, with 50% ****ing slow and deals 1365 damage to all creeps. Guess what? Free 3000 gold per spell :D

Oh and it's not all, his first skill deals 600 FLAT damage + (40+80+120+160+200+240) = 600 + 840 = 1440 ARE YOU KIDDING ME? It's stronger than Finger of Death cmbbined with Laguna Blade at level 7! Oh, not to mention it's AOE!

Look, I really, really don't want to be rude, but this has been kind of a trend lately: "I want to create a hero! Oh, this concept is interesting, let's just make it as I please!!". I am really happy of the enthusiast about hero making, but please... do think about what you make.

The thing is well.... it's just the flat base dps (150*7), what I think is crazy is that it has additional damage that keeps adding up, and that is 60 damage per second = 60+120+180+240+300+360+420, which equals to 1680+1050 = 2730 damage GLOBALLY, with 50% ****ing slow and deals 1365 damage to all creeps. Guess what? Free 3000 gold per spell :D

Oh and it's not all, his first skill deals 600 FLAT damage + (40+80+120+160+200+240) = 600 + 840 = 1440 ARE YOU KIDDING ME? It's stronger than Finger of Death cmbbined with Laguna Blade at level 7! Oh, not to mention it's AOE!

Look, I really, really don't want to be rude, but this has been kind of a trend lately: "I want to create a hero! Oh, this concept is interesting, let's just make it as I please!!". I am really happy of the enthusiast about hero making, but please... do think about what you make.

Interesting idea! I have a couple of questions:

You say the W is channelled. For how long?
Does the evasion from the R stack? (I hope not, or else it's a Windrun and Blur for everyone, not to mention global damage and less manacost that his E.
His W gives global true sight? That's like Zeus ulti, and it's not even ulti!

My suggestions are as follows;

Higher manacost (400) for R?
Less evasion (30%, do not stack) for R?
Basic vision for Revelation, only true sight when within 500 radius from an allied hero.

Yeah, I'm sorry, I acted on impulse and it wasn't even intended to you. It's just that I've been seeing a lot of nonsensical hero ideas that really goes beyond the chart of gamebreaking, and I don't want to comment at all so that no one will get discouraged. However, as I see this one it just sort of build up and well, you get the idea.

Look, I didn't intend to attack your idea personally, since I actually know you and you're doing your best. It was wrong of me to behave that way, and I'm sorry.

Your idea just now was actually interesting and I wouldn't go so far as saying it is horrible (I love the first skill idea of being a tornado of the wildkin's power, the thing is that you should at least reduce the damage). This time I'll be sure to give some constructive feedback rather than *****ing around:

First off: The third skill is the one skill that seems rather normal (sort of similar to Sun Strike), and I find it interesting to use. However, if I were you I would change the mana scaling so that it is more efficient to 130/140/150/160 or somewhere along the line. I would also do the same to the cooldown (probably a fixed 25 seconds?). And I would probably change it to a kind of attack similar to Sacred Arrow instead

Secondly: Escapist is an interesting skill, but seeing as his role, he is supposed to be sort of a support/nuker and that way, I think the Vortex is a much better option. I suggest making it having a pretty long cast range (600 or something) and rework the duration (the damage can stay), probably make it a fix 4 seconds for all level as well as make the slow viable early on (probably to 20/25/30/35% slow)

Third: Revelation is very interesting skill, seeing as how valuable this skill is. I don't have any complain, and some suggestion is probably about making the cooldown change drastic because I don't think 3 seconds different of sight will affect that much (especially with 30 mana increase per level) so how about 90/70/50/30 seconds cool down?

Finally: The current ulti is interesting (is it by some chance skyrim inspired? :p). However, I don't think it is the best to make his ulti some sort of initiation/escape skill like Stampede, why don't make it a lockdown skill instead? Considering how he doesn't really have any disable (except mini-stun), I would say a skillshot disable that has global range is interesting (like Sun Strike) Say, the name is your old ult of Unstable Hurricane that is summoned after 3 seconds probably and covers a mediocre area (400?) with global cast range, that locks down enemies within area while dealing DoT? This way, he is a unique hero that can potentially breaks down initiation or save allies from far away. I would suggest 4 seconds slow of 60/80/100% to both move and attack speed that deals 50/75/100 pure damage per second. Probably with 120 seconds fixed cooldown and 275/350/425 mana cost

I'm really sorry for upsetting you, please understand that it is not in my intention to offend you personally and it is wholly my fault. According my suggestions, it is merely a suggestion and I don't intend to force you to adopt what I thought, but it is merely suggestions that I think might help you (either directly or not)