Kexx, the Cursed Tormentor

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Kexx, the Cursed Tormentor.

Kexx was a the greatest knight of his time. He was noble, brave and had the greatest sense of combat, he was called the tormentor.
He fought against thousands of opponents for years to protect his kingdom from evil forces, then it is only after the war had ended, an evil far more dangerous saw the light of day.
And yet, Kexx fought his enemies until his last breath, then he saw a warrior, a lord, a king, bones, a golden crown, a bone sword, and ITS red eyes, it was his last fight where his people abandoned Kexx against him... the Skeleton King.
Their fight was terrible and unbelievable, but the Skeleton King had the advantage in numbers and power. However, Kexx rose and defeated the Skeleton King, but at this time, Kexx would not have thought he would be reincarnated, and it was his biggest mistake, the Skeleton King killed Kexx with his cursed sword, and Kexx died from it...
Hundreds of years after that, nobody thought about Kexx, and the problem was there, at that time, the Skeletons King has defeated, to become the Wraith King and Kexx was resurrected with him because of the curse, and Kexx then became the cursed tormentor.

STATISTICS :

Side : Dire.
Primary attribute : Strength.
Strength : 23 + 3.0
- Health : 1 : 587 | 6 : 872 | 11 : 1157 | 16 : 1480 | 25 : 2392
Agility : 13 + 1.85
- Starting armor : 0.14 + 1.86
- Armor : 1 : 2.0 | 6 : 3.83 | 11 : 5.26 | 16 : 6.97 | 25 : 12.12
Intelligence : 15 + 1.7
- Mana : 1 : 195 | 6 : 305 | 11 : 416 | 16 : 552 | 25 : 812
Movement speed : 290
Day/Night vision : 1800/1000
BAT : 1.7
Base damage : 43-48 + 23 (STR)
Attack range : 128 (Melee)

ABILITIES :

[MAGICAL DAMAGE] (No Target) (AoE)

Battle cry :

Damage Type : Magical.
Kexx emits a pulse that deals moderate damage, removes enemies armor and gives Kexx bonus attack speed.

AoE : 260/320/380/440
Damage : 90/110/130/150 (67/82/97/112)
Armor removed : -1/-3/-5/-7
Bonus Attack Speed : 15/30/45/60
Bonus Duration : 5.0/5.0/5.0/5.0
Debuff Duration : 3.5/4.0/4.5/5.0

Cooldown : 22.0/19.0/16.0/13.0 Mana Cost : 90/100/110/120
Kexx likes to battle against brave enemies, even if they are afraid to fight him.

Notes:

[MAGICAL DAMAGE] (Target Unit) (Enemy/Ally/Self)

Tormentor curse :

Kexx uses his cursed power to slows movement speed and damages an enemy over time or increases movement speed and heals an ally over time.

Cast range : 350/425/500/575
Slow movement speed : -5/-10/-15/-20%
Damage over time : 15/25/35/45
Increase movement speed : 3/6/9/12%
Heal over time : 10/15/20/25
Duration : 3.0/4.0/5.0/6.0

Cooldown : 13.0 Mana Cost : 100

Kexx likes to use his new powers !

Notes:

(Passive)

Cursed Sword :

Kexx draws his cursed sword from the Skeleton King to kill his enemies and imprison their souls in the sword, which will increase his damage (as added) and gives him an regeneration aura that affects his allies (Heroes) and himself. He also has a chance to do a critical hit. If he dies, he will loose 20% of his collected souls.

Damage per soul : 1/2/3/4
Regen per soul : 0.1/0.13/0.16/0.2
Critical chance : 10/10/15/20%
Critical damages : 1.25/1.5/1.75/2.0

Kexx stoled this from Skeleton King...And he never knew it.

Notes:

[MAGICAL DAMAGE] (Target Unit) (AoE) (Enemy/Self)
[Ultimate]

Torment :

Kexx will uses the secret power from the Skeleton King's Sword to unleash a greater curse on enemies or even himself.

Cast range : 300/400/500
Cooldown : 180.0/140.0/100.0 Mana Cost : 150/250/350

If used on a enemy :
Kexx will curse an enemy causing him to takes damages over time, be slowed, takes physical damage amplification and will die instantly at 8/9/10% of his life. If the enemy die while cursed (the target has to be cursed for at least 3.0 seconds or he won't explode) he will explode and deal massive damage around him.

Damage over time : 40/45/50
Slow movement speed : -12/-24/-36%
Slow attack speed : -24/-48/-72
Physical Damage Amplification : 10/25/40%
Duration : 5.0/7.5/10.0
AoE : 300/450/600
Damage : 400/500/600 (300/375/450)

Even in death, Kexx torment his enemies, even himself.

Notes:

If used on Kexx himself :
Kexx will curse himself granting him health & mana regeneration, bonus attack & movement speed, if he has 8/10/12% of his life he will explode and deal massive damage.

Health regeneration : 4/8/12
Mana regeneration : 4/8/12
Bonus Movement Speed : 10/20/30%
Bonus Attack Speed : 30/60/90
Duration : 5.0/7.5/10.0
AoE : 300/450/600
Damage : 400/500/600 (300/375/450)

Even in death, Kexx torment his enemies, even himself.

Notes:

RESPONSES :

Spawning :
- 'I returned from the battlefield.'
- 'I am Kexx.'
- 'Kexx !'
- 'I am the Tormentor.'
- 'Kexx is back from the dead !'

Beginning the battle :
- 'Let's make our battle plan !'
- 'I have to revenge myself ! Now it's time.'
- 'Skeleton King, you died and rose to Wraith King, I WILL kill you this time !'
- 'Let's begin !'
- 'I'll use Skeleton King's Sword to curse my enemy and myself !'

Moving :
- 'Yes !'
- 'Alright !'
- 'Sword in hand !'
- 'To battle !'
- 'Ah !'
- 'Ahah !'
- 'The curse moves !'

Attacking :
- 'Attack !'
- 'I will !'
- 'This sword wills curse you !'
- 'I'll torment you !'
- 'Let's attack it.'
- 'He's not worth the strike of my sword.'
- 'By my presence !'

Dying :
- 'Not again !'
- 'My curse has ended.. Thank... You...'
- 'noooooo. ....h ... hh. .h .'
- 'No !'
- 'King.. Skel..eton King, I.. will join..... you'

Dying to Wraith King :
- 'No No No NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO !'
- 'Again !'
- 'Why you again !'
- 'Die to a falling King, dammit !'

Dying to Queen of Pain :
- 'A queen killed me ?! Why ?'
- 'Beautiful...'
- 'Akasha, why did you do that ?'

Killing Wraith King :
- 'Yes ! Yes !'
- 'My curse will soon be purged.'
- 'King, King, Skeleton King ?!'
- 'King, King, Wraith King ! Huh that sucks !'
- 'Skeleton King, you look like that guy, what's his name ? Necrophos ?! HAHAHAHAH !'
- 'I have to say it, BOW TO ME you rotten king !'

Killing Queen of Pain :
- 'Sorry Akasha.'
- 'I had to.'

Meeting Wraith King :
- 'Ho **** ?! You there ? How is it even possible ?!'
- 'Well, I think we have to cooperate, but I will kill you after this.'
- 'What ?'
- 'You are no longer the Bone King, I am disappointed...'

Meeting Queen of Pain :
- 'Hum, I think I am in pain, can you help me Akasha ?'
- 'Ho well !'
- 'A succubus !'

Yeah, it's my first "hero", I tried to make him overpowered, but I nerfed him at the same time, hope you like Kexx, the Cursed Tormentor.
Orion'.

CHANGELOG :

1.0 :

Cursed Sword :

- Changed base damage bonus to added damage bonus.
- If he dies, he will loose 20% of his collected souls.

I've done strange heroes.
I'm gonna come back soon.
With new heroes.
With strange mechanics in it.
This is gonna be "strange..."

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Steam: Orion™

Welcome to the hero designing club.

I have one issue with his hero. HOLY WHAT THE HELL! PERMANENT BASE DAMAGE FOR A SKILL THAT ISN'T EVEN AN ULTI! ARE YOU QUITE INSANE! Legion commander is OK, because it isn't base damage and she only has 3-5 second timeframe to get the bonus. This is on ALL the time. It's like taking mixing it with and turning it into base damage.

Also, you tried to make it op? Prepare for Yzreel, he will tear this thing apart word by word :3

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I like this :)
A lot of work has gone into this, all the phrases and such must take a long time to do. Good job!

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I like this :)
A lot of work has gone into this, all the phrases and such must take a long time to do. Good job!

*shameless self-advertisement time*
And mine don't :P?

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A warm welcome to you, my friend! And yes, heed ThreadOfFate's advice. Yzreel will rip this apart, piece by piece.

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I know, but, Kexx has to kill to earn damage, and it's only 4 per soul (only from heroes) at max level...

I've done strange heroes.
I'm gonna come back soon.
With new heroes.
With strange mechanics in it.
This is gonna be "strange..."

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I know, but, Kexx has to kill to earn damage, and it's only 4 per soul (only from heroes) at max level...

Yes but because it's permanently on; if this guy starts to snowball, it turns into an avalanche VERY quickly.

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*shameless self-advertisement time*
And mine don't :P?

Yours do too! :)
But there's not a better feeling than getting praise on your first entry ;)

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Yours do too! :)
But there's not a better feeling than getting praise on your first entry ;)

This is true.

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Yes but because it's permanently on; if this guy starts to snowball, it turns into an avalanche VERY quickly.

Well he has to snowball VERY HARD then, because it's not retroactive and damage doesn't scale with level, if he kill a hero with level 1 he will earn 1 damage, and if level it just after the kill, it won't up to 2 damages, but well, I think I should nerf it, I didn't think about that :
10 heroes kills x 4 damage = 40 base damage calculated into critical hit.
It's kind of scary, imma 'balance it'.

I've done strange heroes.
I'm gonna come back soon.
With new heroes.
With strange mechanics in it.
This is gonna be "strange..."

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