Constructive Feedback

Inspired by Sando and FleetAU, I've decided to get some constructive feedback on my playstyle, but rather than pick a match where I feel the other player's "Skill" was questionable, or where some Russian salgged me off...okay that also happenned, but 8{D ...I decided to pick a game where I didn't feel I made any glaringly bad plays with one of my strongest Heroes.

This is the game. http://dotabuff.com/matches/665987276

If anyone has time, grab yourself some popcorn, watch the replay, and see what you think I could do better.

Just one thing, I know I Rushed a Helm of the Dominator, intending to Stack the Ancients especially since we had a greedy lineup, but I decided against Stacking, due to the Roaming Nyx Assassin and my gut instinct that Faceless Void would end up stealing my Stacks if I tried to make more than 1 or 2. -_-

From basically looking over items and skill build, nothing is amiss imo. I will get back to you on the gameplay because I love to sit back and watch.

Overall, i thought you played this well. There were a few things at the end of the game, but they didn't matter, like you dieing at ~51:30. You could have popped your manta and walked away. Personally, i would have gone ganking more, but I think you made the right choice trying to win the farm battle verses the FV.

I INSPIRED SOMEONE, life goal completed, lets go home now. Anyway, I'll download it in a sec and watch it. I think I would have got a heart over a satanic considering their lineup, would let you tank out sniper always poking you and voids chronos.

One thing, how exactly did I inspire this?

Watch the video, you'll see those things were no trouble at all. First time Void Chrono'd me, he died immediately after...I lived and took a Tower. Whenever Sniper came near me, he melted under Eclipse 8{3

I suppose I may have made a bad choice with the Satanic (derp, I built HoD, must built Devilstick ._.) and I think I only ever used it once...after a fight ._. Heart of Tarrasque was definitely a better Pickup, but in my defense, my next Item would have been Eye of Skadi or Black King Bar#2 8{D

By getting useful feedback on your MMR and matches 8{D

Actually, now that you bring it up, I forgot Mastadoom 8{3

Heart isnt that good of an item on luna, if you'd rather have HP then lifesteal then get skadi, skadi is pretty much the agility carry heart apart from a few exeptions like naga and PL.

Would of preferred MoM over HoD. Makes clearing neutral camps and pushing lanes a lot easier. Only fear would be dealing with Nyx.

Items are ok I think, but if you took 4-2-2 skill build instead of 4-0-4 you would have much more farm and could end game faster. Generally you want to max your Q and put 2 points in E, then when you lvl up put next 2 points in glaives so that you can easily clear camps in woods and lane.

BG no watchinio

EDIT. Also thanks to glaives change, they will do more dmg if they just bounce on your enemies than your passive.

So, I just wanted to put this match up here because I'm really frustrated about it: http://dotabuff.com/matches/667489120

Basically, RingozwenY is a friend of mine who is kind of good, and I got invited to his party with that Ogre Magi and that Puck. I knew them from previous matches, and they were not that good, but since they now have about 1100 hours I thought they got better. Oh, the really problem isn't their skill level, but the fact that they just randomly insult you if you're having a hard time while they're making many more mistakes then you and are also less experienced.

I don't want to tell more because I could make things unbalanced for those people who want to analyze the match, just give me some feedback and criticism if you want.

About skill builds - veno maxed Q and W without wards, puck maxed E before W (wtf?), lycan builds is just I don't know...
I think you should max your E before W on huskar (spear > passive > passive > spear > passive > ulti > passive > spear > spear).

Lycan had 0 gold and exp, like he was playing this hero for 1st time
Ogre went for some ****** arcane into bloodstone build, not even disassembling arcanes, also he had 2nd gpm in your team
Puck at least had blink dagger >.>
Veno had obs and sentries but I don't understand why he had treads and helm of iron will


What is this hell of mmr? :D