Mid Dazzle... Armor? That's Cute.

If this isn't a joke, God have mercy on your soul.
For the guide, Mar1ach1 and MuoiKhoang already pointed out what you need to change.

Why has't Dagon been brought to consideration?

He Blandwiches,

I go conform with your core items, though I believe Desolator is really more of a troll build, since the armor redux from Weave (mb upped by Aghanim's Scepter) and Medallion of Courage is most likely to be enough for all kind of situations and there are a lot better core items on Dazzle, such as Mekansm and a lot better Desolator carriers out there.

Medallion of Courage lets not only hit you harder, but most of all your Shadow Wave as a nuke since it is physical damage. You do not mention this, though imo this is the best part or Medallion of Courage.

Building Daedalus or Mjollnir on Dazzle is imho trolling as they abuse Dazzle as a carry / physical dps dealer, which he simply is not.

Some further explanantions of the "not so easy to get" abilities and their usage would be great. Also some formatting as suggested by MuoiKhoang is a must for readability. Keep going.

**** you DTS ... we still pay for what you did against Ehome in WDC 2010.
Just kidding I agree on medallion,Dazzle can be a situational mid ,but deso is a bit expensive .
Mjollnir can be pretty good considering in public people focus heroes even with grave so a hero can probably take 1000-1500 damage during those 5 seconds of prolonged life,but I think some other hero preferably picks both deso+mjollnir

If you are going for a physical damage oriented build, you should consider Orchid Malevolence as a situational item. It is the most damage/cost efficient item for inteligence heroes.

Hi, It seems like you are not familiar with formatting on Dotafire. I recommend you to check out Dr.D guide to formatting, which had helped me a lot when writing my own guide.
Your contend is also lacking (gameplay, tips and tricks...). I'm looking forward to future updates.
Cheers!