HCC Entry: Ayler, The Mirrored Mystique

Here is my hero idea for the contest. Is it okay if I post it like this?

http://dotaconcept.com/hero/3849

I created it on this site, and everything can be viewed in organized order.

Hey Kianicus!

If you would like to participate in the hero concept contest, you will have to post your hero concept here on our website. We won't accept entries that are posted on other websites.

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Ayler, The Mirrored Mystique

LORE:
Ayler was formed within the valley of thoughts. It was not long after that he became aware of himself, granting him knowledge over the very concept of time and space. Power appeared from within and he grasped it, creating various portals all over the place and starting his first journey towards the discovery of reason. After many travels, he found himself at a place of war. A place where two sides confront each other while trying to destroy and to protect. Both aiming for one thing. Their ancients. Ayler found it exhilarating and entered the eternal battle, the eternal conflict. And his time is only to come.

STATS:
Intelligence(primary) - 27 + 2.25
Agility - 12 + 1.60
Strenght - 21 + 1.50
Base Damage: 17 - 27
Base Move speed: 290
Base Armour: 3

Level 1 | Hit points: 620 | Mana: 374 | Damage: 44-54 | Armour: 3
Level 10 | Hit points: 1040 | Mana: 752 | Damage: 76-86| Armour: 6
Level 25 | Hit points: 1740 | Mana: 1262 | Damage: 118 - 128| Armour: 11
Sight range: 1800/800
Attack range: 65
Missle speed: 1125

Spells:

Q - Repulsive Mirrors
Ayler summons number of mirrored portals that surround him while rotating clockwise, deflecting each danger that comes his way, and reflecting it back at the enemy, with a slight modification. The stronger the spell, the stronger the modification. Attacks and AOE spells are not included, for they seem to be either too narrow or too wide. A projectile-like ability is reflected back to its caster upon hitting the mirror.

Mana Cost: 100/110/120/130
Cooldown: 25/21/18/15
Duration: 5
Number of Mirrors : 4
Reflected damage : Source
Speed of mirror rotation : 250ms
Return damage: 40%/60%/80%/100%
Pierces spell immunity : Source

W -The will of the Time
Ayler consumes his own health in order to change the fabric of time, creating chaotic distortion around him, slowing every enemy in its place.

Mana Cost: 100/120/140/160
Cooldown: 35/30/25/20
Consumes health : 5%/10%/15%/20% (current)
Attack slow : 40
Duration : 5s/7s/9s/11s
Movement slow : 40%
AOE around Ayler : 900
Pierces spell immunity : NO

E - The flow of reality
After spending uncountable measures of time within portals, Ayler has grown accustomed to the changes happening around him, making him grasp the reality on a more superior level than others around him, giving him a stoppage device. The device is filled with enemies' stolen time, up to full charge, that unleashes a powerful beam that stuns everything in its path and deals damage.

Mana Cost: 50/100/150/200
Cooldown: 25
Base Stun : 1s/1.3s/1.6s/2s
Additional stun per 80% MS stolen : 0.5s/0.8s/0.9s/1s
Pierces spell immunity : NO
Base damage : 50/75/100/150
Additional damage per 40 AS slow : 40/50/60/75
Beam range : 500
Beam widht : 200

R - Passage
Ayler summons two portals connecting each other, that he can control at will. He can close them, lock them and move them. Closing them will send them back to their dimension. Locking them will temporary forbid anyone except Ayler to use them. Moving them will change their current position. The portals can be used by either a friend or a foe unless it is locked. Portals can't be destroyed but can be targeted. Spells go through them, for they act as a gateway, and upon targeting them, the spell is transmitted from one portal to the other, and vice versa. This works on both targetable and aoe spells. Spell immune heroes still pass through the portal.

Mana Cost: 250/325/400
Cooldown: 120/100/80
Portal duration : 15/20/25
Move speed of portals : 400
Closing delay : 1s/2s/3s
Health loss upon lock : 5%
Range of creation : 1000/1500/2000
Lock delay upon activation and deactivation : 2s/3s/4s
Pierces spell Immunity : YES
Health loss upon close : 10%

D - 1st Portal
Can move, lock and close. Connected to the 2nd portal.

F - 2nd Portal
Can move, lock and close. Connected to the 1st portal.

TALENT TREE:
Level 10: +10 Strenght | +6 Intelligence
Level 15: +90 Gold/min | +15% Magic ressist
Level 20: +150 cast range| +250 Health
Level 25: + 1 Repulsive Mirror | +20% MS and AS slow The will of the Time




Is this better?

Yup, that's good, thank you and good luck! :D