Funmade Story (aiming at reviews)

I still remember the day, the day Lord Furion arrived, the day that the war ended. I was there, in the bloodiest of battles, the last battle between the Radiant�s and Dire�s last bastion, all else had been burned, all else had been destroyed and for several times, I, the simplest of grunts, had met the stink of battle. But I digress. As I was saying, after several attempts in awakening he finally answered, a demigod amongst Heroes and soldiers. We did not know what to expect and, as soon as he inhaled the air around him, a mighty roar erupted from our surroundings �What is this stench that defiles my Mother?�, after a minute of silence a voice was heard �Corruption Sire, death and hatred towards all who live� I answered, to my very own shock. �Come soldier, I need your eyes to show me what I do not want to see� and as soon as the forest around us spoke, it started engulfing me in roots and dirt and before I could panic, I was near the Dire encampment, with only that demigod near me.

All around us only death remained, a grotesque defensive tower rose mockingly above a completely dead forest, burned of every bit of life and mutated by every bit of hate. �Mylord we shouldn�t be here, we�re too close to the enemy camp.� I said before looking around to see furion walking blindly towards the nearest trees.

He touched the nearest one and waited. It didn�t react. Next he spoke to it. It didn�t listen. It was then that the great Lord opened his eyes and only fury existed, only burning painful fury, in complete control he whispered and, suddenly, the tree creaked, he talked and the tree started to regain its color. He Roared its name and it awoke to life, renewed. As Lord Furion turned to me, I could see tears in his eyes, his burning eyes. �Brother this is not your battle anymore, tell your camp to assemble, make preparations to save this forest and bring our brothers here unarmed. I assure you, you will not need any weapons when you come back.� Said this roots where there were none before surged forth to embrace me again and, before I could notice, I was back at my camp. What happened next is the stories told by my brothers in the front lines, for they cannot forget what happened next.

Out of nothing the whole forest started gaining its colors back and, as soon as they returned, sentience came with them. With a constant Roar everywhere, life surged where it should not have existed and devoured what once had tried to destroy it. A enormous portion of the forest rose to attack the grotesque tower, impaling and smashing everyone within. Once this was done more and more parts of the forest rose and destroyed what once was its invaders. Fire was thrown at them by our enemy but, even if it burned one or two, ten more rose to take their place and after a minute or two, even the burned ones stood up renewed. As all the towers fell to this incredible onslaught and only the main bastion stood, the soldiers finally saw Furion, shedding a tear for every tree that fell, embracing every bit of nature that died but transpiring an aura of pure anger that could freeze even the bravest of hearts.

As the renewed forest started entering the Great Bastion of The Dire army, Their general surged forth, DoomBringer, the Scorcher. Around him trees instantly died, his scorching aura burning them and with his mighty sword he cut dozens at a time and, what seemed a guaranteed victory now seemed to turn into despairing defeat. Suddenly The Demigod appeared calmly, out of the earth grass itself and with a single word, brought forth an entire forest to surround his foe, instantly he ordered His Mother servants, the trees, to bind him and with a final Boom of anger and Fury thundered in Her Devine Language, He asked for Mother�s Nature wrath.
And nothing happened.

The DoomBringer laughed, starting to break free of his wooden prison but, suddenly, stop on his tracks.

At first no one understood when Furion turned away but when they looked at DoomBringer again, the Demon chest started to glow, green and yellow, than it started to expand, very quickly, very painfully and before he could speak his infamous Doom, the Demon exploded, Smitten on the spot. After this, The Dire�s Bastion was instantly overwhelmed by trees and life, being completely destroyed. Our Lord was not seen again but we know, we know that he is watching us, seeing if we keep his Mother with health, protecting what he and we find valuable.
Life.





I created this text because i really want to play this game and I hope i can get some feedback on my fanmade story. Hope you liked it and if you really think i was worthy, i would love a DOTA2 beta key =) if not, a comment with some info would rock!

Thanks in advance =)
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Interesting take on furion I suppose, but I don't think anyone here can give you a beta key...

I just wanted a review, i already have the key =)

One thing I think you could improve on, is if you have copy pasted it from another source, replace the missing text that is currently displaying an upside-down ?