STORY CRAFTING THOUGHTS WELCOMED

So this story is like a continuation.

Lemme do the originals.



So this one guy named .. Tarien.. I guess.. Is a poor man. He lived with his family they work as a a farmer poor indeed. He got a sword as a heirloom from his father after he died at a war, its a bit.. ugly and broken but it will do for him. One day he and his brother/friend went to this one desert in search of a rare herb. The herb almost extinct since the appeareance of Tol'darot.

Tl'dr (abbreviated) was once a normal kimgdom. But then the denizens discovers magic a powerful weapon that they decided to develop in secret. But soon the secret is out and the other 6 great kingdoms, Falgar, Horith, Keral Dagir, Groll, Teragur (tarien's home), and Borig, went mad. They want tl'dr to destroy all magic but they refused. They then launched a full scale assault at tl'dr. Kaireth, the founder of magic and king of tl'dr, knowing the other 6 kingdoms will perish if he fought back, sealed away tl'dr underground with Great Gate of X dividing them. The armies was defeated as a result of the magic's effect but the survivors are more than if tl'dr fight back. The land was then barren and become a desert (used to be grasslands). The Great Gate of <Insert creative name here> is now simply a mirage at sandstorms, but the existence of tl'dr is still believed by everybody 450 years later.

Continuing, the desert was raging with sandstorm and they saw the gate. His friend/brother was killed by the gate's defence system but Tarien was taken away, its said that the gate will accept any 'chosen magic wielders' into their domain. He went to the tl'dr and sees that the kingdom is underground with fertile soil magicked by them. There were houses, rivers, grasses, farms, caves, hills, woods, etc. they were happy there.

tl;dr (pun intended) i havent think next part, but he learned magic, met some people, befriended his teacher (Horace, who is also the king) blah blah blah. Then the evil dragon Koron that God knows how it get down there comes and threatened the city. The dragon was usually fed with magic once every decade to prevent him frim attacking. The treaty is not over yet but the flying lizard wants to attack. He saod that their time of seclusion is approacing to an end. The citizens thinks that one of the politicians are conspiring with the dragon. They suspected a whole lot of people.

Then there was this earthquake followed by the dragon's roar. Tarien decides to solo the Koron's Lair raid (he was a DPS wtf) but he was helped by friends and <insert badass heroine name here>, Horace's wife. But horace appeared last second to save the dragon and he was apparently the villain. He went outside the gate and the dragon fly away to the city and wants to attack.

tl;dr they beat dragon, them human wizards fight animated rock thingy. Tarien kills Horace but the gate is unsealed. Some crazy man told Teragur's king of tl'dr reappearing. He sent an army and a courier to all other 4 kingdoms. (Btw kingdoms rise and fall. Once Horith is emperor, then defeated, then Groll fall to the attacks of savage races, then more) they then found the Great Gate (it aint an actual gate btw) and the armies of tl'dr.

The rest is a bunch of diplomacy ****s

plot twist! i was never writing. i THOUGHT about them. whenever im not doing anything i imagine the story and it all just happened there. i imagined the dragon attacking the town, i imagined the sandstorm, etc.

i imagined like dozens of stories over the years.