Forge of Creation - Finals Submission Thread

Finalists must create a hero based upon a ROLE given to them by Random.org and create an ITEM that would be considered CORE for that hero.

voting:

Originality /10
Viability /10
Role suitability /10
Lore /10
item synergy /10

5 judges possible 250 points...

ROLES

Porygon361 POSITION 4 - jungler / soft support
ThreadofFate POSITION 3 - Initiator / offlaner.
Terathiel POSITION 2 - Mid / semi carry
Oldkainen POSITION 1 - Hard Carry
Mrlocket POSITION 5 - Hard Support


cant wait to see what you lads come up with :D

OK! Good luck everyone :D

just an update for all finalists... you have 3 days left. ive given you all an extra day for submissions since ive been contacted by the majority asking for it.

get these ideas in boys!!!

So it's 8 days starting from 5th may?

lol what ... no u have three days left to submit your ideas. haha nice try but troll no troll

Lol I'm drunk, it suppose to be 5th feb ._. Anyway my work is almost complete, so it is sufficient for me.

Narthal, the Ruined One

Radiant Strength
Base strength: 23(+2.4)
Base agility: 19(+2.0)
Base intelligence:20(+1.9)
Base armour: 3
Base damage: 56
Movespeed: 300
Attack type: Melee
B.A.T: 1.7

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Lore
It was a drizzly evening, when they came. The lost ones. The Abyssals. They lumbered out of the treeline, swords drawn and teeth bared. Stonehall was prepared, though. The bronze legion marched out of the city, in perfect formation; years of training come to fruition at last. All of them sturdy, unyielding in their defences. All but one.

The watchman, Narthal, who had first spotted the Abyssal horde was standing, but barely. He had thought this a minor scouting patrol, and wished for a sliver of the glory. Thus he dressed himself in regular steel armour, with a sword and nothing else. He would be fine. The bronze legion never failed.

And then he came. A towering figure from the gloom, trampling the fierce Stonehall knights with barely a thought. The behemoth ignored all except one of the warriors. The Legion Commander herself.

Narthal could have cried out in joy. This was his chance to escape? Screw honour, his life was on the line! And so he ran.

He made it not five feet before he was set upon by mages bearing potent curses. Enough to severely injure him, but keep him alive in the pain for as long as possible. He fell to the ground, lacking the strength to even cry out. His honour gone, his life forfeit, Narthal let the pain claim him.

Yet Stonehall has a strict law about traitors and about necromancy. The only case in which necromancy may be practised is on the bodies of traitors and deserters, that they may be given a final chance of honour in death.

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Skills

Q: Staggering force (Target enemy)
Narthal crushes the defences of a target enemy in close range,
dealing a stun and decreasing their armour for a short duration.
If this ability lowers armour below 0, the excess armour loss is
instead gained as positive armour for Narthal, but only until the
duration expires.
Damage: 100/115/130/145
Stun: 1.4/1.6/1.8/2
Armour loss: 7/8/9/10
Armour loss duration: 10
Cooldown: 15
Mana cost: 110
Narthal has learned to defend himself better
with his scraps of weaponry

W: Lethal charge (Target ground, AoE)
Narthal charges forward in a chosen direction, dealing an AoE
slow and damage upon reaching his destination. This gains
bonus damage depending on Narthal's armour.
Range: 950/1000/1050/1100
Base damage: 70/80/90/100
Slow(%): 15/20/25/30
Extra damage per armour: 5
Cooldown: 19/18/17/16
Mana cost: 100
Let it be known that the coward of Stonehall comes for them.

E: Malicious field (Aura)
Narthal passively generates an aura of hatred, making enemies deal
less damage depending on how many enemy heroes are in the AoE.
AoE: 420
Damage loss per enemy hero(%):4/5/6/7
Enemies become demoralised as they face the ruined one.

R: Intense fear (Active, AoE)
Narthal unleashes a blast of undiluted terror at all nearby
enemies, forcing them to run in the opposite direction to Narthal
for a duration. After the fear has expended, Narthal gains bonus
armour for a short time
AoE: 400
Duration: 2/2.5/3
Damage: 200/300/400
Bonus armour: 5/8/11
Armour duration: 8
Cooldown: 90
Mana cost: 200
The coward in turn makes others flee HIM

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Responses

Moving
- "Fear? Me?"
- "Painbringer..."
- "Death is the only destination."
- "So many bodies."
- "To the fray."

Attacking
- "Frenzy.
- "Head the charge!"
- "My punishment eternal..."
- "Death is truly a shame, isn't it?"

Dying
- "My final...Rest?"
RARE - "Is this...peace, after these years..."
- "Eternal pain no longer"
- "Life is a sickness. My disease was cured."

Level up
- "Closer to death..."
- "The time is almost upon us."
- "Death will be a mercy to them."

Killing a hero
Legion Commander - "The hero falls to the coward. What a shame."
Legion Commander - "You meet the end I was DENIED!"
Undying - "Were you me? Was I you?"
Invoker - "Eternal life, meets eternal death. Death wins."

Meeting an ally
Undying RARE - "Nico, my cousiiin. Let's go dying!"
Undying - "The flesh of humans await."
Meepo - "Have you ever desecrated a grave?"
Queen of Pain - "I think you could learn from my punishment"
Legion Commander - "Yoouuuuuu..."
Legion Commander - "The coward alongside the hero of Stonehall."

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Lich's Chestplate

Category: Armour
( Chainmail + Chainmail + Buckler + Recipie)
Cost: 2400
+2 all stats
+15 armour
ACTIVE: Grants 2 bonus armour to the holder and all nearby allies
PASSIVE: Grants a passive 2 armour for every nearby enemy hero
The armour of a Lich King, this enchanted chestplate uses its enemy's
life force as a barrier against attacks.

Either a flaw or intentional, there is no balance judging. Im...Just....Saying.

Balance is incorporated into Role suitability. if the hero is unbalanced then they wont be very suitable for their role now will they?

last 30 hours guys.

i expect all submissions by tomorrow at the latest.

get to it!!!